I need someone to beta read my epic fantasy book.
Your job will be to read the book and give feedback when you are done. This will be done by answering a set of questions and then writing a short text of how I can improve the book. I would also like some comments on the characters, plot and if there are things about the writing in general, both good and bad.
The text you will be asked to read is roughly 140K words long and contains violence, strong language and sex.
The beta reader should be a native English speaker and should love to read fantasy.
The story follows three characters in a medieval-like setting. Ivan, second son of the mighty Lord Styles and sentenced to death for murdering his sister, receives a message in prison that sets a string of events in motion as he tries to right the wrongs of his life. His brother Thedric remains convinced of Ivan’s guilt and is still trying to move on from the loss of their sister. Finally, there’s the young Princess Animaelin Noble, whose family has fallen from grace and who lives under cover of a different name. Her father and brother silently await the whisper of opportunity, while Ani herself prays for normality.
This is meant as the first book in a series of four and this first installment will not contain that many classic fantasy elements as the magic left in the world is not easily accessible for everyday humans.
I hope this sounds interesting. Let me know if you have any questions.
January 16, 2018
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