Short children's book writer

Writing Creative Writing Posted 2 years ago

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Delivery by April 3, 2014




I need a children book writer to rewrite a short story .
the story (short book) was written in Hebrew and translated to English not professionally.
I need it to be rewritten with American-English in a style for children at age 3-5
and add if needs some childish "soul" including the name of the story

see the following story

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I have few stories (books) ready + many at queue so am looking for long term relationship

Jonathan wants to sleep

Jonathan was tired. All the evening he played with his best friend Ron.They had been playing hide and seek with cars.
After dinner Ron went home. Jonathan was very tired so, he had a bath and went to sleep.
“Mother ……I can’t sleep”, Cried little Jonathan from his bed.
Mother came into the room, hugged Jonathan and said, “We will count cute lambs together, one lamb……two lambs, three lambs…………”
“No”, Jonathan muttered. “It’s boring and I don’t fall asleep.”
Mom hugged Jonathan and said, “So maybe we could count white cats together? One white cat……two white cats…… three white cats......”
“Oh Mother”, Jonathan snapped back, desperately. “I’m so tired, why am I not asleep?”
Mom hugged him strongly and asked him to think about white feathers falling from the ceiling. Jonathan closed his eyes and was quiet. Mom smiled to herself at the sight of a sleeping boy.
Then Jonathan suddenly burst out laughing, “Ha… ha……ha………the feathers are tickling me I’m not sleeping”. Mom thought what do I do? The child is so tired but can not sleep.
“You know”, his mother said. “Just lie down in the bed with your eyes closed. Do not sleep just rest. Close your eyes and rest I’ll sit here beside you”.
“I don’t sleep I just rest,” Jonathan muttered, and falls asleep.
He dreams of a lamb with cute white cities and feathers falling from the sky.

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