Hi, my name is Rhys. I'm about to launch a weight loss product called 'The Fat Burning Brain' and would like an experienced copywriter to have a read through it, make a few changes and suggest some ways to make it better. It is roughly 6900 words but will likely be cut down a bit with editing.
It is targeted at men and women (mainly women) of a conservative persuasion, around the age of 50. It is a content based sales pitch at the low price point of $9 with higher priced upsells. The goal is to convert well on warm traffic (affiliate email ect) and generate a high volume of customer that can be monetised on the backend.
The best sales copy in my niche is at oldschoolnewbody.com (the one I'm modelling), http://www.truthaboutabs.com/fat-burning-kitchen.html and fatdiminisher.com (best story VSL targeting my customers)
It shouldn't take more than a couple of hours to read through it, edit it and make a few suggestions.
Just let me know a top converting product you wrote the sales copy for and the price you'd do the above for.