-Need to have two linkedin recommendations rewritten.
-I already know who the recommenders are going to be, so I don't need you to put in a recommendation for me.
-The content for each recommendation must be unique and different.
-Please feel free to edit the existing recommendations to align with my goals and information as below.
-The rewritten recommendations must align with the future job-title/keywords that I will provide. The goal is such that future recruiters see me as a potential candidate for future jobs, based on recommendations on my profile.
-Goal is to project myself as senior, professional, seasoned, leader, learned, excellent communicator, focused, etc.
-Keywords: business value, time to market, senior, professional, seasoned, leader, learned, excellent communicator, focused, technical, functional, business knowledge, spearhead, etc.
- Please feel free to incorporate your own vocabulary, keywords, etc. as appropriate. I have no reservations.
The future job titles are:
Principal BI/DW Data Architect
Lead Data Architect
Principal Data Architect
SAP HANA Technical Architect
FYI --> BI means Business Intelligence, DW means Data Warehousing. SAP HANA is a technology product.
Existing Recommendation #1:
"I have worked with John Doe for many years at Acme Inc. I have watched him develop from a junior ETL developer to a trusted data architect. He is reliable, dedicated, and learns quickly. Over the years whenever we needed someone to learn a new technology or take on a particularly challenging project, John Doe always volunteered. When there is a critical incident that needs our most capable resource, John Doe is often the person requested. Beyond all of these valuable qualities, he is good person and a supportive teammate. We have been lucky to have him on our team."
Existing Recommendation #2:
"John Doe is an experienced Data Architect and Data integration Architect working at Acme Inc. He has experience in extracting data from various source systems such as SAP ECC and Siebel. He has experience working with 30 terabyte Oracle database in BI space. He is good in solving BI performance issues. He has experience in loading data into HANA and knows HANA Modeling. He is very much customer focused. His technical expertise coupled with customer focus makes him a good BI resource to have."
What I need from you?
1. How long will it take you to rewrite and deliver once i hire you?
2. Writing/Rewriting Work Samples, URLs to your work, etc. Linkedin Samples even better.
3. Revisions, as needed to make it perfect. I guess 1-3 (being the most I hope) should work.
Please let me know if I can provide any additional information.
Thanks for looking.