I have updated this assignment with a new PDF, which has just one diagram, not two. It is what I want as far as overall shape and wording.
I already have someone who can make a clean version of this. What I need is someone who can do a stylized version--something with pizazz that adds to the clarity and maintains the simplicity.
A few more nitty gritty details:
The inner loop ("Progress Loop") and outer loop ("Course Correction Loop") should be colored blue and red respectively, probably transparent versions of these two colors which are already on my website:
Blue: R: 20, G: 91, B: 154
Red: R: 202, G: 10, B: 78
Since my handwriting is terrible, here are the words for the diagram:
Feedback Loops for Effective Action
Course Correction Loop
START: HAVE GOAL
Clarify Immediate Objective
Identify a Small Next Step
Take Next Step
TO NEXT GOAL OR OBJECTIVE