We are launching a marketplace service and are worried that our copy is not as potent or specific as it could be in certain cases. We have 5 pages that need to convert and interest our visitors. Our biggest worry is that we are not presenting our differentiating factor enough in our copy and at times are too text heavy in our explanations.
We are looking for someone with a copyrighters mind to review our messaging on these pages, propose tweaks and rewrite parts of the copy for excitement, user-friendliness, accuracy, and value proposition potency. As far as tone, Humor is always good but knowing how to build excitement and trust is vital.
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