Story of 137 pages needs to be expanded with more dialogue and sub-plots to about 190-200 pages. Below is a short synopsis.
A brief synopsis of the story:
Much like the Inferno with the 9 circles of hell, this story is the circles of life and things that really have happened..
Middle-aged woman falls asleep and dreams that she wakes up. She would supposedly wake up somewhere strange and the room would be filled with people with similar circumstances to each other. The first one were all women who were pregnant, none particularly wanting the child they were carrying, and others not wanting their grandchild, or trying to take the child away from the mother. The woman was super tired, closed her eyes and went back to sleep [all this time she is not really awake, just dreaming that she is] and was tired of people's problems, and then would go through another circle.
Some of these circles had things that swirled that were related to the people in the circle and their circumstance....