Track needs further development; as a demo it showcases songwriting and vocal skills alongside melodic arrangement, though the sound is old and needs to be brought to life. As the producer, you would push (and work with) the singer to develop the sound, song, and sonic footprint, bringing it to modern standards succinct with the immediacy of current hit songs! Totally fun here, just trying to be concise.
Singer would eventually go back into the studio and rerecord anything necessary. All bets are off - how would you change the track? Open to any creative suggestions. More samples available upon request.