We have wrote a 750 word script for the video commercial to explain our website's visitors what our project does. However because we are not professional sales writers, our message might not be conveying the message in the best way possible. We need a professional to edit our script so that our message would be delivered in a more professional sounding way, so it would convey what we do better to the visitors, and drastically improve the call for action, so that once the video is watched people would be more enticed to read more on our website and share the video with their friends.
We have attached the script, please write in your bid how you would improve it in details, so we can choose the best candidate for the job. Please ask if you have any questions about the task or about our project.