I have a 1,221 word document. I have everything in this doc that we need. It is a little too long
and needs to be around 800 - 900 words long instead of 1,221.
You must take what we have a re-word it to MOTIVATE the reader to take action
and nothing less...
This will be placed on a 24 hour line and used as an informational call - so it MUST
do it's trick otherwise - will just waste our time... Extremely important to re-word things
or even put some of it in your own words - as long as it's much better than what we
have in certain places...
Also - yo may want to put things in a different order somewhat so they it flows very well.
You MUST be a MOTIVATIONAL writer - someone who can put something in someones
head so they clearly understand everything - SIMPLE - SIMPLE - SINMPLE to
This will make or break our call - so if you thinnk you havbe what it takes to take this script
and make it convert to atleast 85% of the people to listen to the entire call then I
would like to speak with you... and if not - please do not bid here...
The call will end up being 5 - 6 minutes long - you must keep their attention so
that they will not hang up...
I will need it back to me at it's best within the next 24 hours...