Rejected from university. I need to appeal!
i wrote my life stories.
1. Change grammar( sophisticated, classic level)
Revise whatever you don't like to put in.
2. Add stories whatever you like.(you have to add story how much going to this university. (You have to story something really critical and interesting story.
ONLY NEW INFORMATION ALLOWS TO CHANGE OR ADD INTO THE ESSAY) Add at least 300 words with new information whatever you like.
3. If you have any question regarding about writing. Just contact me, ill be anytime on online.
4. Due date is may 15th. You have exactly 8days.
5. If there is anyone who experienced about appealing to university, i highly suggest you take this job.