Tim does an amazing page by page breakdown of what works and what doesn't. In addition, his analysis of premise, structure, character, pacing and theme are extremely helpful. His notes are encouraging as well. Not only does he tell you what needs to be fixed, but he also offers suggestions and tells you what's working. I'll try to make the theme less overt, not quite sure how to do it, as there is a message in my story, sort of like A Christmas Carol (which I plan to go see right now) and It's a Wonderful Life. Thanks , Tim!