You will get a professional critique of your children's picture book manuscript
You will get a professional critique of your children's picture book manuscript
- Delivery Time 10 days
- Number of Revisions 0
- Number of Words 1000
10 days
delivery —
Oct 20, 2024
Revisions may occur after this date.
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Fund the project upfront. Samantha gets paid once you are satisfied with the work.
Project details
Let's turn your children's book manuscript into a polished story ready for querying!
You only have ONE chance to wow a literary agent or publisher with your story. I will help you make it the best it can be!
I will spend 4-5 hours on your manuscript and provide an assessment on:
- Your story's hook, concept, and narrative arc
- Relatability and marketability
- Illustration potential
- Setting and story structure
- Character development and plot
- Word count and readability
- Pacing and page turns
- Language devices, voice, and POV
- Line and developmental edits
Why should you hire me? I am an experienced picture book writer with two books coming out this year. HONOR FLIGHT (Benchmark Edu., May 2022) and DEAR RAINBOW BABY (August 22, 2022, Clear Fork). I have been a member of the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) since 2019, and participate in several critique groups. I have critiqued dozens of manuscripts like yours!
Let's get started.
Client Testimonial:
"Samantha’s feedback and specific analysis of every aspect of the manuscript was invaluable. I will absolutely use her for any future endeavors. Timely, professional, and top quality work." - Tara
You only have ONE chance to wow a literary agent or publisher with your story. I will help you make it the best it can be!
I will spend 4-5 hours on your manuscript and provide an assessment on:
- Your story's hook, concept, and narrative arc
- Relatability and marketability
- Illustration potential
- Setting and story structure
- Character development and plot
- Word count and readability
- Pacing and page turns
- Language devices, voice, and POV
- Line and developmental edits
Why should you hire me? I am an experienced picture book writer with two books coming out this year. HONOR FLIGHT (Benchmark Edu., May 2022) and DEAR RAINBOW BABY (August 22, 2022, Clear Fork). I have been a member of the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) since 2019, and participate in several critique groups. I have critiqued dozens of manuscripts like yours!
Let's get started.
Client Testimonial:
"Samantha’s feedback and specific analysis of every aspect of the manuscript was invaluable. I will absolutely use her for any future endeavors. Timely, professional, and top quality work." - Tara
Service Type
Proofread & Edit, CritiqueLanguage
EnglishContent Type
Book$150
- Delivery Time 10 days
- Number of Revisions 0
- Number of Words 1000
Optional add-ons
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Fast 5 Days Delivery
+$20
Additional Revision
+$20
Additional 100 Words
(+ 1 Day)
+$15
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About Samantha
Comms Professional | Children's Book Author & Editor | USAF Veteran
Montgomery, United States - 6:22 pm local time
I am a senior communications professional with 13 years of proven experience in the aerospace industry, Department of Defense and publishing industry.
Specializing in internal communications and content creation, I can assist you and your business not only build a reputable brand, but craft messages to employees and customers which instill a sense of pride and purpose.
Responsible for executive leadership messaging, newsletter content and intranet management for over 90,000 employees in my current role, I am an expert at picking out spelling and grammar mistakes, while perfecting the right tone and voice.
As an Air Force veteran, you can expect attention to detail, punctuality and the utmost professionalism in every interaction.
I’m also an agented children's book author represented by the Metamorphosis Literary Agency, and an active member of the Society of Children’s Books Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI). I have two books publishing in 2022 via Benchmark Education and Clear Fork Publishing
I can't wait to help you with your project! I'm looking forward to connecting with you.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Samantha can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Samantha receives requirements from you.
Samantha works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Receive manuscript from client
Share via Google docs or send a word doc to sgassmanwrites@gmail.com
Provide feedback, developmental edits, and overall critique
I will evaluate your manuscript and provide suggestions for edits and offer a professional critique