Create new letterhead

I am looking for someone to redesign my new stationery.
Feel free to make other suggestions if you have better ideas.
I am sending you the current version and a version with the desired changes.
Thank you very much.

Template for Designing Letterhead(Final Format 210 \times 297 mm)Format of your finished print product📏 Data Format: 216 \times 303 mmThis is the format your print data must be created in.This format includes a 3 mm bleed.This bleed will be removed during production. Please extend backgrounds and objects that fall off the edge all the way to the edge of your data format to avoid white page margins.📐 Final Format: 210 \times 297 mmThis is the format in which you will receive your finished print product.🛡️ Safety Margin: 3 mm (on all sides)This is measured from the final format and prevents unwanted cropping of your texts and information during production.