Tshirt Design

Hello, working on a design that will eventually be used for a TShirt back print. I have a mock up in AI (I don’t like using AI in final projects) and it is a cartoony look. I also have a previous design that captures the cartoony look perfectly. The design can’t have too much ink in one area either or it’ll feel ‘heavy’ on the shirt. Again I Ave pictures as well! Will need sketch/mockup before I begin payment ATTACHED BELOW: the “land of 10,000 lakes” is the current design I have so don’t draw that one, that’s an example of the look I’m going for! The state of hockey one is the ai mockup that I actually want done. I mostly want it drawn by a real person and taking away all the ink space (the ice the loon/bird is skating on can be just skate marks rather than the whole ice, create negative space here) And remove he hockey stick and mug on the right too