HR/Document Specialist for Reference Letter

Employer Reference Letter for Electrical Worker (Australia) I am a Project Manager for an electrical contractor and require assistance rewriting an employer reference letter for one of our employees. We originally prepared and submitted a reference letter as part of an Australian electrical licensing application. The licensing assessor advised that the reference did not sufficiently demonstrate the breadth and depth of the employee's practical experience and requested more detailed project examples. Following this feedback, we had the reference expanded to include detailed examples of work undertaken, including project locations, scope of works, tasks completed from commencement through to completion, equipment and systems worked on, testing and verification activities, who performed the testing, and how the supervising electrician verified the work. While the revised reference now addresses the assessor's technical requirements, we have since been advised that the document reads too much like it was AI-generated. We therefore require it to be rewritten so it reads naturally and professionally, as though it was genuinely written by a project manager or supervising licensed electrician. The successful freelancer will be provided with: The original employer reference. The assessor's feedback outlining the additional information required. The revised reference containing the required technical content. The objective is not to add new information or fabricate experience. The technical content should remain accurate, but the writing should be restructured to improve flow, vary sentence structure, reduce repetition, and sound authentic while continuing to satisfy the licensing authority's requirements. Experience with technical documentation, HR documentation, employer references, or the Australian electrical/construction industry would be highly regarded.