Proof / Edit 3 blog posts that I'll be using on LinkedIn Pulse

I have a 3-part LinkedIn Pulse series about AI search optimization (AEO/GEO) for B2B marketers. The drafts were AI-assisted and heavily refined, but a few passages still read machine-made. I want a human pass that adds voice without breaking what's working. Scope: - 1,950 words total across 3 posts - Line editing and selective rewriting, not a structural overhaul - The data, numbers, and claims must stay exactly as written — edit the prose, not the facts - Keep it at roughly a 9th grade reading level - Each post must work standalone AND as part of the series Voice rules (non-negotiable): - No corporate buzzwords (leverage, robust, seamless, delve, landscape, etc.) - No rhetorical question openers, no "In today's world" framing - No constructions like "It's not X, it's Y" or "That's not X. That's Y." - Direct, confident, conversational. Think smart practitioner talking to peers, not content marketer writing for an algorithm. What I want from you: - Flag every passage that still reads as AI-written and rewrite it - Smooth the flow within each post and across the series arc - Punch up the hooks... first two lines of each post decide whether LinkedIn readers click "see more" - Tracked changes or a before/after summary so I can see what you changed and why To apply: Tell me the most common tell that gives away AI writing, in your opinion, and how you fix it. One paragraph max. I'll send the docs to the top 2-3 answers and pick from there. I'll share the file with the winning bidder.