MA Thesis Refinement

Project Overview: I am looking for an experienced academic editor to perform a structural line-edit on a completed Master's thesis focusing on Management and Artificial Intelligence in Business. The draft is currently around 15,000 words. The Core Problem: Currently, the draft is flagging at roughly 85% AI detection (plagiarism/AI footprint). The ideas, structure, and research are entirely mine, but the writing style is triggering false positives due to predictable sentence structures and vocabulary. Your Task: I need you to heavily edit and refine the document to bring the AI detection score as close to 0% as possible. What you MUST do: Alter sentence structures (increase burstiness), vary paragraph lengths, remove predictable "AI vocabulary," and ensure the document sounds like a rigorous, naturally written academic paper. What you MUST NOT do: Do not use automated "AI Humanizer" software or basic text spinners. These destroy the academic tone and context of my arguments. Do not alter the core methodology, facts, or citations. Budget & Timeline: Rate: Fixed price of $5 per 1,000 words (Total project budget: $75). Deadline: Fast turnaround required. I have an impending defense later this month, so the work must be completed promptly. Requirements to Apply: Please start your proposal with the word "Burstiness" so I know you read this entire post. Confirm that you will do this manually and not rely on software spinners. Briefly mention your experience with academic editing, specifically for business or technology topics. I look forward to reviewing your proposals!