You will get an honest, detailed beta read of your fiction manuscript
Project details
I will beta read your fiction manuscript and provide honest, constructive feedback from both a reader’s and an author’s perspective. My goal is to help you understand how your story may be experienced by your intended audience—not to rewrite it or change your voice.
Your reader report may address:
My overall reaction to the story
Character development and emotional connection
Plot clarity and consistency
Pacing and areas where my interest slowed
Confusing or underdeveloped moments
Dialogue and character relationships
Questions or expectations created by the story
The strengths that kept me reading
I have worked as a beta reader since 2018 and am also an independently published fiction author. I understand how vulnerable it can feel to share an unfinished manuscript. My feedback is honest but respectful, with explanations that help you decide which revisions are right for your story.
This service does not include proofreading, line editing, or developmental editing. Please contact me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds 100,000 words or contains highly sensitive material.
Your reader report may address:
My overall reaction to the story
Character development and emotional connection
Plot clarity and consistency
Pacing and areas where my interest slowed
Confusing or underdeveloped moments
Dialogue and character relationships
Questions or expectations created by the story
The strengths that kept me reading
I have worked as a beta reader since 2018 and am also an independently published fiction author. I understand how vulnerable it can feel to share an unfinished manuscript. My feedback is honest but respectful, with explanations that help you decide which revisions are right for your story.
This service does not include proofreading, line editing, or developmental editing. Please contact me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds 100,000 words or contains highly sensitive material.
Genre
Fiction, Thriller, Young AdultLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$45
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Standard
$65
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Advanced
$110
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|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 7 days | 10 days | 14 days |
Sample Line Edit | - | - | - |
Reader Report |
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Additional 100 Words
+$10
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Anji V.
Aug 19, 2026
Beta-read Lilt
This is my 4th time working with Hilary because her feedback and insightful, from-the-gut beta reading services are really invaluable. Highly recommend!
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Anji V.
Aug 12, 2026
Manuscript beta read
This was the first time I hired Hilary for a beta read. It was also my first novel, and she was gentle but direct and helpful, giving me actionable feedback. I did go on to hire her for my subsequent three novels. So clearly she's a keeper.
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Anji V.
Aug 12, 2026
Beta read manuscript #2
This was my second time hiring Hilary for feedback, and again she really hits the mark . I appreciate her no-nonsense POV. Highly recommend.
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Anji V.
Aug 12, 2026
Beta read manuscript #3
Hilary is amazing to work with. Straightforward feedback that is actionable, heartfelt, and helpful.
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About Hilary
Beta Reader for Fiction | Detailed, Honest Reader Feedback
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Cincinnati, United States - 8:31 am local time
I work across most fiction genres, but I’m especially interested in psychological suspense, thrillers, mysteries, fantasy, and darker character-driven stories. I accept select romance projects when the story also contains strong suspense, mystery, fantasy, or psychological elements.
My goal is to help you understand what is working, where readers may lose interest or become confused, and which areas could benefit from further development. Every order includes in-line comments throughout your manuscript and a detailed reader report explaining my overall experience.
My feedback may cover:
Plot development and pacing
Character development
Dialogue
Author voice
Themes
Setting and atmosphere
Reader engagement
Areas of confusion or inconsistency
I welcome most genres and forms of creative writing. My feedback is honest, constructive, and focused on helping you strengthen your manuscript while preserving your unique voice and vision.
Please note: I do not accept religious nonfiction.
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