You will get Beta Read + Developmental Feedback — Fiction & FPA Novels
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Experienced novel editor & beta reader (indie editing since 2018) offering honest, in-depth feedback that blends fresh reader reactions with targeted editorial suggestions.
Deliverables:
In-document comments (Google Docs/Word Track Changes): real-time reader thoughts, emotional responses, confusion flags, and highlights of what works.
Editorial notes on plot, pacing, character arcs, world-building, tension, romance beats, stakes, consistency, and flow—genre-tailored.
Comprehensive critique/review (3–8+ pages): clear breakdown of strengths, weaknesses (with examples & page refs), and actionable steps to strengthen your manuscript.
Specialized in FPA-style novels (Fiction Profits Academy structures/tropes for high-output indie romance, fantasy, sci-fi series). Great for long-term series clients refining rapid-release books.
Focus genres: Fantasy (epic, romantasy, urban, dark), Sci-Fi (space opera, dystopian), Romance (all subgenres, incl. paranormal/steamy indie).
Note: No projects with cannibalism, child abuse, or sexual assault.
Ready to help your story hook readers?
Deliverables:
In-document comments (Google Docs/Word Track Changes): real-time reader thoughts, emotional responses, confusion flags, and highlights of what works.
Editorial notes on plot, pacing, character arcs, world-building, tension, romance beats, stakes, consistency, and flow—genre-tailored.
Comprehensive critique/review (3–8+ pages): clear breakdown of strengths, weaknesses (with examples & page refs), and actionable steps to strengthen your manuscript.
Specialized in FPA-style novels (Fiction Profits Academy structures/tropes for high-output indie romance, fantasy, sci-fi series). Great for long-term series clients refining rapid-release books.
Focus genres: Fantasy (epic, romantasy, urban, dark), Sci-Fi (space opera, dystopian), Romance (all subgenres, incl. paranormal/steamy indie).
Note: No projects with cannibalism, child abuse, or sexual assault.
Ready to help your story hook readers?
Genre
Fantasy, Fiction, RomanceLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$50
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Standard
$100
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Advanced
$250
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|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 2 days | 15 days | 30 days |
Number of Words | 15000 | 50000 | 100000 |
Sample Line Edit | - | - | - |
Reader Report |
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Melinda K.
Feb 26, 2026
Fabulous experience with excellent insights.
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Caps C.
Oct 12, 2025
Hannah provided the best feedback for me and gave me great insights. She is a true professional. Super quick turnaround as well. Thank you again :).
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Tommy C.
Jul 30, 2025
Hannah is A++++ and will always be my go-to for any editing or reviewing!
TC
Tommy C.
Jul 19, 2025
Hannah is FANTASTIC, in all caps. Every time we do a project together I'm just eternally grateful for having met her! This was a review of a short book I wrote and she went above and beyond with her expert analysis.
JP
Joseph P.
Dec 18, 2024
Hannah was able to highlight some key areas of the manuscript that I had been wondering about myself, and provided some helpful insights into how I could go about modifying them. Very prompt replies to my messages and concerns and I would highly consider working with her again in the future.
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Gail T.
Jun 5, 2026
Developmental Review of Romance Book Outline
I absolutely loved working with Hannah. She did a fantastic job as both a beta reader and proofreader, catching details while also providing thoughtful feedback that helped improve the story. She was dependable, easy to communicate with, and a pleasure to work with. I highly recommend her and would gladly work with her again.
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Sandy A.
Apr 29, 2026
Beta Reader/Editor
Hannah provided thorough feedback as my beta reader.
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Melinda K.
Feb 26, 2026
You will get Beta Reading & Manuscript Critique (Fantasy, Sci-Fi, & Romance)
Fabulous experience with excellent insights.
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Ashley d.
Feb 7, 2026
Line Editor Needed for 75k Word Sci-Fi Novel
Hannah was a pleasure to work with, right from the start (even before hiring). She was flexible, regular communication and a great edit and feedback too. We'll be using her again for the next in the series. Thanks Hannah
LK
Lisa K.
Nov 4, 2025
Beta Reader for Contemporary Romance.
I hired Hannah to beta read my AI contemporary romance novel. She gave me super helpful feedback on my completed book. I was mainly figuring out how to move forward in my self publishing journey. After her extensive written analysis, I wanted to discuss the best way to move forward. In our phone consultation she guided me in the direction I need to be. I will be working with Hannah on many future projects.
About Hannah
Editorial Specialist | Fiction Editing, Beta Reading & Ghostwriting
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Hot Springs, United States - 11:45 am local time
From untangling plot structures that aren't quite working to line editing prose until every sentence earns its place, I bring the same level of craft and dedication to every manuscript that crosses my desk.
I am an editorial specialist and published fiction author with extensive experience across dark romance, paranormal, contemporary romance, fantasy, and horror.
I have worked on manuscripts ranging from short fiction to novels exceeding 100,000 words, delivering developmental editing, line editing, copyediting, proofreading, beta reading, and romance ghostwriting services to indie authors, first-time writers, and established authors alike.
My background as both an editor and a working author gives me a perspective that goes beyond the technical. I understand what it takes to bring a story from concept to publication-ready manuscript.
Whether you are publishing your first novel, building a Kindle Unlimited catalog, or simply need a trusted editorial partner to help elevate your work, I am here to provide professional, thoughtful, and author-centered support at every stage of the process.
I believe great editorial work is a collaboration. My role is not to rewrite your story; it is to help you see it more clearly so you can make it everything you intended it to be.
Let's work together.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Hannah can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Hannah receives requirements from you.
Hannah works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Reading
In this initial step, I will read through the entire manuscript. During this phase, I will take notes on the content and provide possible suggestions, which may include comments within the document.
Evaluation & Transcription
After reading the manuscript, I will evaluate and transcribe my notes for the write-up. Note: Depending on the manuscript's condition and the notes taken, specific comments may not be for every chapter.