You will get a professionally edited college admissions essay


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Are you confused about writing a college application essay or a personal statement for university admission?
Let me transform your ideas into a WINNING Admissions Essay!
⭐ WHY ME?
✔️ Professional Admission Consultant: 7+ years of experience in college admission application essays
✔️ High Success Ratio: Clients have secured admission to top schools around the world including IVY League: John Hopkins USA, Oxford UK, King's College London, UNSW Australia, and UoT Canada.
✔️ On-time Delivery
✔️ Guaranteed Success and Guaranteed Satisfaction
⭐ WHAT DO YOU GET?
✔️ Proofreading your College Admissions Essay: Grammar, Punctuation, Vocabulary, Tone, Word-Choice, Logical Arguments, Overall Structure
✔️ Extensive Editing of your Application Essay: Make it more persuasive, captivating, and compelling for the admissions committee
✔️ Comprehensive Feedback / Critical Analysis of your Essay
✔️ Golden Tips for improvement
✔️ Unlimited FREE Revisions
What are you waiting for? Message me, let me choose the best package for you to buy, and ensure your admission with a WINNING Admission Essay!
I respond to messages instantly!
Let me transform your ideas into a WINNING Admissions Essay!
⭐ WHY ME?
✔️ Professional Admission Consultant: 7+ years of experience in college admission application essays
✔️ High Success Ratio: Clients have secured admission to top schools around the world including IVY League: John Hopkins USA, Oxford UK, King's College London, UNSW Australia, and UoT Canada.
✔️ On-time Delivery
✔️ Guaranteed Success and Guaranteed Satisfaction
⭐ WHAT DO YOU GET?
✔️ Proofreading your College Admissions Essay: Grammar, Punctuation, Vocabulary, Tone, Word-Choice, Logical Arguments, Overall Structure
✔️ Extensive Editing of your Application Essay: Make it more persuasive, captivating, and compelling for the admissions committee
✔️ Comprehensive Feedback / Critical Analysis of your Essay
✔️ Golden Tips for improvement
✔️ Unlimited FREE Revisions
What are you waiting for? Message me, let me choose the best package for you to buy, and ensure your admission with a WINNING Admission Essay!
I respond to messages instantly!
Language
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$95
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Standard
$175
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Advanced
$250
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|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 3 days | 4 days | 5 days |
Number of Revisions | 1 | 1 | 3 |
Number of Words | 600 | 600 | 600 |
Topic Research | - | - |
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David W.
Nov 27, 2024
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Ryan M.
Nov 8, 2023
Sohaib is an excellent writer and a pleasure to work with. He helped me write an amazing motivation letter for a scholarship application. He was very attentive to my needs and requirements, and delivered the letter on time and within budget. He also provided me with valuable feedback and suggestions to improve my letter. I highly recommend him for any writing project you might have. He is a true professional and a great asset to the Upwork community. Thank you, Sohaib!
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Ju Heon C.
Jul 10, 2023
professional, quick, and communicative
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Jul 10, 2023
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Jessica M.
Apr 10, 2022
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Mayse B.
Feb 12, 2026
Job writing
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Patrick M.
Nov 18, 2025
Help my son on college application process
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Parth P.
Jun 3, 2025
Graduate Schools Essay Edit and Review
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Simone M.
Dec 4, 2024
Letter of motivation
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Thea T.
Dec 2, 2024
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About Mohammad Sohaib
College Admissions, Personal Statement, & College Application Essay
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Job Success
Islamabad, Pakistan - 1:54 pm local time
With 8 years of experience in admissions consultation, I've guided 500+ students towards admission to prestigious universities including Ivy League institutions: Stanford, Johns Hopkins, MIT, Yale, Princeton, Harvard, and UC Berkeley, as well as renowned international universities like Oxford, King's College, Cambridge, and Imperial College.
I specialize in:
- Personal Statement / Statement of Purpose (SOP)
- College Admissions Essay
- Common App & Supplemental Essay
- Ivy League MBA Admissions
- Letter of Motivation
- Scholarships & Funding Application
- Recommendation Letter / Reference Letter
- Cover Letter
- Question/Answer-based Admission Application
My services for you:
1. Selecting the university that best suites you and preparing your application material:
I’ll guide you through choosing the right universities, considering your academic and extracurricular activities, and career aspirations. Together, we’ll create a comprehensive application plan, covering everything from when to submit your materials.
2. College Admissions Essay / Personal Statement / Letter of Motivation:
The essay and personal statement part of the college application can feel overwhelming. But fear not! I’ll be your guide. We’ll work together to create a narrative reflecting who you are. Your experiences, dreams, and aspirations will come alive on paper, leaving a lasting impression on admissions officers.
3. Recommendation Letter / Reference Letter:
I’ll guide you in choosing the right recommenders and help create impactful letters that strengthen your application.
4. Academic Resume Building & Extracurricular Activities:
I will help you articulate your extracurricular engagements in a way that exhibits your dedication, leadership, and growth. We'll also construct a captivating resume that emphasizes your skills and achievements.
5. Preparation of your interview:
Drawing from my comprehensive knowledge of interview processes, I’ll guide you in developing confidence and refining your communication skills. Together, we’ll ensure you present your best self during interviews.
6. Navigating Financial Aid and Scholarship:
I’ll guide you through seeking financial aid and applying for scholarships. Together, we’ll explore opportunities to lighten the financial load of your education.
I'm here to assist if you’re looking for an experienced professional who blends expertise, meticulousness, and a drive to transform challenges into opportunities. Let’s work together to make your university dreams a reality!
Regards,
Sohaib
Keywords:
CollegeNET Admissions, Personal Statement, University, College, Admissions, Application, Graduate, College Essay, Admission Consultant, Resume, Academic Essay
(Note: I do not write admission essays or any mentioned documents from scratch. I only provide proofreading and editing services, along with feedback/critical review and tips for improvement.)
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Mohammad Sohaib can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Mohammad Sohaib receives requirements from you.
Mohammad Sohaib works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Submission of Requirements
You will submit: 1. CV 2. Link/Website of the target program 3. Your draft
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