You will get beta read fiction book and provide honest critique
Rising Talent
Rising Talent
Project details
Are you looking for a reliable beta reader who will provide honest, detailed, and constructive feedback on your fiction book?
I will professionally beta read your manuscript and give clear insights on plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, readability, emotional impact, and overall reader experience. My goal is to help authors improve their stories before publishing.
Whether you write romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, horror, or young adult fiction, I will provide thoughtful feedback from a real reader’s perspective.
What You Will Receive:
Honest reader feedback
Constructive criticism
Detailed reader report
Notes on plot and pacing
Character and dialogue analysis
Suggestions for improvement
Grammar and readability observations
Fast communication and delivery
Genres I Read:
Romance
Fantasy
Mystery
Thriller
Horror
Young Adult
Science Fiction
Contemporary Fiction
Historical Fiction
Perfect for self-publishing authors, Amazon KDP writers, and first-time novelists who want professional feedback before publishing.
I will professionally beta read your manuscript and give clear insights on plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, readability, emotional impact, and overall reader experience. My goal is to help authors improve their stories before publishing.
Whether you write romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, horror, or young adult fiction, I will provide thoughtful feedback from a real reader’s perspective.
What You Will Receive:
Honest reader feedback
Constructive criticism
Detailed reader report
Notes on plot and pacing
Character and dialogue analysis
Suggestions for improvement
Grammar and readability observations
Fast communication and delivery
Genres I Read:
Romance
Fantasy
Mystery
Thriller
Horror
Young Adult
Science Fiction
Contemporary Fiction
Historical Fiction
Perfect for self-publishing authors, Amazon KDP writers, and first-time novelists who want professional feedback before publishing.
Genre
Children's Literature, Fantasy, FictionLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$20
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Standard
$60
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Advanced
$120
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| Delivery Time | 2 days | 4 days | 6 days |
Sample Line Edit | - | - | - |
Reader Report | - | - | - |
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Behzad H.
Jul 2, 2026
Fantasy Story Development / Co-Writing for “Anchor ” - Ongoing Series
It was a very pleasant collaborative project with Abeeb. I hope we will have the opportunity to work together again on a new project.
About Ayankunle Abeeb
Beta read | beta reader | beta reading | Book editing | Proofreading |
Abuja, Nigeria - 3:26 am local time
Your manuscript deserves more than a quick grammar check. It deserves an editor who understands how readers experience a story, where they lose interest, what breaks immersion, and what transforms a good manuscript into one readers remember.
Whether you're preparing your first book for publication or polishing your next release, I'll help you refine your manuscript with thoughtful editing, honest feedback, and meticulous proofreading so you can publish with confidence.
Every author reaches a stage where they become too close to their own writing. Small inconsistencies go unnoticed. Pacing begins to feel uneven. Dialogue may lose its natural flow. Repeated words, grammatical errors, awkward sentences, and formatting issues quietly reduce the quality of an otherwise excellent manuscript. That's where I come in.
I specialize in helping authors strengthen their manuscripts while preserving their unique voice. My goal is never to rewrite your book into my style. Instead, I improve clarity, readability, consistency, and overall quality while ensuring your story remains authentically yours.
My Services
Book Editing
I carefully edit your manuscript for clarity, sentence flow, consistency, readability, word choice, dialogue, pacing, and overall writing quality. Every suggestion is made to strengthen your manuscript while maintaining your individual voice and style.
Beta Reading
I read your manuscript as your target audience would, while providing detailed, constructive feedback on:
• Character development
• Plot structure and consistency
• Story pacing
• Dialogue
• Emotional impact
• World-building
• Reader engagement
• Confusing or weak sections
• Overall reading experience
You'll receive honest feedback that highlights both your manuscript's strengths and the areas that need improvement before publication.
Proofreading
Once your manuscript is nearly complete, I perform a careful final review to eliminate:
• Grammar mistakes
• Spelling errors
• Punctuation issues
• Typos
• Inconsistent capitalization
• Formatting inconsistencies
• Minor language errors
This final polish helps ensure your manuscript is publication-ready.
Manuscripts I Work With
I work with both fiction and nonfiction, including:
• Romance
• Fantasy
• Science Fiction
• Mystery & Thriller
• Young Adult
• Historical Fiction
• Literary Fiction
• Memoir
• Self-Help
• Business
• Personal Development
• Christian Books
• Children's Books
What You Can Expect
✔ Detailed editing using Microsoft Word Track Changes
✔ Clear comments and explanations throughout your manuscript
✔ Respect for your writing voice and creative vision
✔ Honest, balanced, and constructive feedback
✔ Careful attention to detail from beginning to end
✔ Professional communication and dependable turnaround
Why Authors Choose to Work With Me
Editing isn't simply correcting mistakes. It's understanding what readers expect and identifying the small details that determine whether they keep turning the page.
I approach every manuscript with patience, professionalism, and genuine care because I understand how much time, creativity, and dedication every author invests in their work. My edits are thorough, respectful, and designed to help you produce the strongest version of your book.
Whether your manuscript needs thoughtful editorial guidance, insightful beta reading, or a meticulous final proofread, I'm committed to helping you present your work with confidence.
If you're ready to elevate your manuscript before publishing or submitting it, click Invite to Job or send me a message. I'd be happy to discuss your project and help bring your book to its highest potential.
Skills
Book Editing | Book Editor | Beta Reading | Beta Reader | Proofreading | Proofreader | Manuscript Editing | Manuscript Editor | Fiction Editor | Nonfiction Editor | Copy Editing | Copy Editor | Line Editing | Line Editor | Developmental Editing | Developmental Editor | Manuscript Review | Manuscript Critique | Editorial Feedback | Book Proofreading | Grammar Editing | Grammar Check | Spelling Correction | Punctuation Editing | Sentence Structure | Clarity Editing | Dialogue Editing | Character Development | Plot Development | Plot Consistency | Story Structure | Story Editing | Pacing Improvement | Track Changes | Microsoft Word Editing | Fiction Manuscript | Nonfiction Manuscript | Novel Editing | Novel Editor | Book Manuscript | Self-Publishing Support | KDP Book Editing | Author Support | Publishing Preparation | Publication-Ready Manuscript.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Ayankunle Abeeb can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Ayankunle Abeeb receives requirements from you.
Ayankunle Abeeb works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
What genres do you beta read?
I beta read romance, fantasy, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, horror, YA, and most fiction genres.