You will get detailed constructive feedback on plot, characters, pacing & readability.


Project details
I don’t just read; I analyze, question, and immerse myself in your story like a future reader would. My feedback pinpoints what’s working, what’s missing, and what could shine even brighter. Think of me as your story’s first test run, ensuring it hooks, moves, and resonates before it reaches the world.
Genre
Romance, Superhero, Young AdultLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$25
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Standard
$75
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Advanced
$125
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| Delivery Time | 4 days | 8 days | 12 days |
Number of Words | 10000 | 30000 | 50000 |
Sample Line Edit | - | - | - |
Reader Report |
Frequently asked questions
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Brielle M.
Sep 26, 2023
Sensitivity Reader
Theresa did an amazing job of critiquing my story! She was fast, kind, and comprehensive. She made sure to provide updates throughout the project, and all of her feedback was very helpful with resources for me to look into to understand more. Could not recommend her enough! <3
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Shana M.
Jan 17, 2022
Need help plotting short romance stories
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Samiha H.
Aug 3, 2021
YA Muslim Ghost Writer Needed
Theresa was the best person for my project. Talented, dedicated, responsive, creative, and flexible, she was everything I was looking for and more! I enjoyed working with her and look forward to future endeavors with her.
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Mike W.
Feb 24, 2021
Fluent Indonesian speaker & Casino Expert Required
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Nikola P.
Feb 9, 2017
A native Indonesian translator needed for a game localization
Well-done! Thanks!
About Theresa
Writer | Ghostwriter | Story Consultant | Business Strategist
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Job Success
Solo, Indonesia - 1:46 am local time
That’s where I come in.
As a skilled writer, ghostwriter, story consultant, and business strategist, I help bring ideas to life, whether through compelling storytelling or strategic business planning. With a growing portfolio and repeat clients on Upwork, I take pride in delivering high-quality work tailored to each client’s unique needs.
💬 What Clients Say
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ “Theresa did an amazing job critiquing my story! She was fast, kind, and comprehensive. She provided updates throughout the project and included helpful resources. Could not recommend her enough!”
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ “Theresa was the best person for my project—talented, dedicated, responsive, and flexible. She exceeded my expectations, and I look forward to working with her again!”
✍️ Writing & Story Development
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📖 Story Development & Brainstorming – Stuck on ideas? I help break creative blocks, expand plots, and build immersive worlds.
🖋 Ghostwriting – Need your story written? I craft engaging, character-driven narratives tailored to your vision.
📚 Beta Reading & Story Feedback – Get detailed, constructive feedback on plot, pacing, and character development.
🌎 Sensitivity Reading – As a globally experienced woman of color, I ensure respectful and accurate representation.
📊 Business Strategy & Consulting
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📈 Business Development – I help refine your vision, identify opportunities, and create structured growth plans.
🎯 Brand & Content Strategy – I craft compelling narratives that connect with your target audience.
🌏 Business Localization (Indonesia) – Expanding to Indonesia? I provide insights on market entry, cultural adaptation, and local business strategies.
✨ Why Work With Me?
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✔ Creative & Analytical – A unique blend of storytelling expertise and business acumen.
✔ Proven Track Record – Clients love my insight, communication, and professionalism.
✔ Flexible & Client-Focused – Available for hourly, milestone-based, or project-based work.
✔ US-Educated & Native-Level English – Expect polished, professional content.
Let’s turn your vision into something exceptional! 📩 Contact me today and let’s bring your vision to life.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Theresa can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Theresa receives requirements from you.
Theresa works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Detailed Reading/Assessment of the Content
In this step, I will read your manuscript and analyze all the points mentioned above. Highlight the main issues and suggest improvements.
Writing Beta Reading Feedback Report
I will write a detailed feedback report covering your manuscript's positive and negative points. I will suggest necessary improvements and write recommendations that can help make your manuscript better before publishing.




