You will get a clear appraisal of your investor pitch deck
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You only get one chance to get your investment pitch right, so you will receive an objective and critical assessment of your investment pitch "readiness" based on 9 key criteria. I will scrutinize your pitch through the eyes of a sophisticated investor as if they had just received your investment pitch in their email inbox for the first time.
I will look at the document in the cold light of day and give you a score based on each of the criteria. I'll also give you a total score. I'll also point out your pitch's strengths and weaknesses and outline areas where you can improve your pitch to capture the attention of your target investors the first time around.
Please note that this is a pitch assessment. As an experienced investor myself, I urge you not to outsource your pitch deck unless you need help with the design. This is a red flag for investors.
However, I'm happy to make up to two reviews per pitch within a two-week timeframe, depending on which service you choose.
I will look at the document in the cold light of day and give you a score based on each of the criteria. I'll also give you a total score. I'll also point out your pitch's strengths and weaknesses and outline areas where you can improve your pitch to capture the attention of your target investors the first time around.
Please note that this is a pitch assessment. As an experienced investor myself, I urge you not to outsource your pitch deck unless you need help with the design. This is a red flag for investors.
However, I'm happy to make up to two reviews per pitch within a two-week timeframe, depending on which service you choose.
Language
EnglishBusiness Type
StartupPlan Format
PowerPointPlan Purpose
Investors Roadshow, Loan Approval, Partnerships/Joint VenturesWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$250
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Standard
$350
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Advanced
$500
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| Delivery Time | 3 days | 2 days | 1 day |
Executive Summary | - | - | - |
Company Description | - | - | - |
Industry & Competitor Analysis | - | - | - |
SWOT Analysis | - | - | - |
Customer Analysis | - | - | - |
Tailored Marketing Plan | - | - | - |
Review & Critique | |||
Financial Forecast | - | - | - |
Investor List | - | - | - |
Outreach Email Copy | - | - | - |
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Elliot A.
Feb 21, 2022
Trevor gave me a very detailed critique of my investor deck, all the elements in the deck that had been niggling me were pointed out, suggestions made and scores given. The deck was rated out of 100 in lots of different areas and the opinions of 3 different experts were given for each area. Couldn’t recommend more. I will be using again in the future.
Thanks Trevor and the team.
Thanks Trevor and the team.
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Harry R.
Dec 31, 2021
Amazing work, prompt response. He and his team broke down the pitch deck and offered the feedback we needed. He doesn't beat around the bush and will tell it as it is and my team really appreciates that.
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Dominic W.
Dec 24, 2021
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Peter G.
Nov 30, 2021
Trevor was great to deal with and helped immensely with his insight and feedback.
I will use him again.
I will use him again.
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Neli T.
Mar 3, 2025
Professional Proof-Reader with copywriting experience for business documentation
Thank you for your commitment and effort!
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Paul L.
Oct 25, 2024
Pitch Deck Outline
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Emanuell T.
Jun 28, 2024
Business Plan Edit & Proofread
EA
Elliot A.
Nov 6, 2023
1 hour Zoom call
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Paul L.
Jul 4, 2023
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the outstanding work that Trevor did on my investment memo. I was very impressed with his ability to quickly and accurately proofread the memo, identify any errors or inconsistencies, and make helpful suggestions for improvement.
His work was outstanding in every way. He was able to understand the complex financial concepts in the memo and make sure that the language was clear and concise. He also made a number of helpful suggestions for improving the structure and flow of the memo.
I was particularly impressed with his turnaround time. He was able to complete the work very quickly, even though I had a very tight deadline.
I highly recommend Trevor for any business proofreading or editing work.
His work was outstanding in every way. He was able to understand the complex financial concepts in the memo and make sure that the language was clear and concise. He also made a number of helpful suggestions for improving the structure and flow of the memo.
I was particularly impressed with his turnaround time. He was able to complete the work very quickly, even though I had a very tight deadline.
I highly recommend Trevor for any business proofreading or editing work.
About Trevor
Economics, Finance & Investment Editing | Board-Level Scrutiny
100%
Job Success
Oxford, United Kingdom - 1:12 am local time
***** "Brilliant work by Trevor. He went through the entire manuscript in three days." - M. Dodsworth, Managing Director, Europartnerships.
***** "Wow. Trevor is certainly worth the investment."- K. Mavroulakis, CEO, Empact Ventures.
***** "It pays to have someone with solid business and financial experience to spot those mistakes before submitting our investment memorandum." - Martin F, Director Advisor FM.
ABOUT ME:
I specialise in editing and reviewing economics-, finance-, and investment-related documents for founders, investors, and senior decision-makers.
This includes investment memoranda, pitch decks, investor letters, prospectuses, valuation materials, financial reports, and long-form analytical or policy documents — where clarity, structure, and credibility matter as much as language.
My work is not cosmetic. It is about ensuring that documents stand up to real scrutiny from boards, investors, and committees.
BACKGROUND:
I am originally from Dublin, Ireland, and have over 25 years’ experience as a C-level executive, investor, and board member. I have raised several million dollars in venture financing and am very familiar with the investment and due-diligence process.
I am multilingual, have lived and worked in a dozen countries, and have led large international teams. I also serve as a judge at the annual Business Book Awards.
This background allows me to bring a decision-maker’s perspective to every document I review — not just that of an editor.
WHY CLIENTS HIRE ME:
Most clients come to me because they need more than proofreading.
With me, you get:
- Board-level scrutiny of financial and investment documents
- A deep understanding of how investors and committees read
- Tightening of arguments, structure, and logic — not just language
- Identification of credibility leaks, inconsistencies, and weak framing
Business leaders are overwhelmed with information. Documents must get to the point — fast. A poorly structured or inconsistent document is not just a writing issue; it reflects directly on the business itself.
NON-NATIVE ENGLISH EXPERTISE:
Having run international teams for many years, I regularly work with non-native English writers at a senior level.
This often goes beyond light editing and may involve substantial restructuring or rewriting. My goal is always the same: to ensure the document reads as if it were written by a native, senior professional, without losing the author’s intent or authority.
HOW I WORK:
I approach each document from the perspective of the end decision-maker.
My process typically includes:
- Structural and logical review of arguments
- Scrutiny of assumptions, clarity, and flow
- Attention to accuracy, consistency, and references
- Final polishing to ensure the document is professional and publication-ready
I have written, reviewed, and presented hundreds of management books, investment pitches, reports, white papers, academic papers, and board documents — and I have reviewed many of these myself as an investor.
Much of my work is confidential and investor-sensitive, which is why I cannot share most documents publicly.
SERVICES:
Proofreading (Native English)
Thorough review for grammar, punctuation, spelling, terminology, and consistency (numerals, formatting, capitalisation).
Copyediting (Native English)
Rigorous editing to improve clarity, sentence structure, flow, and precision. Removal of repetition and tightening of language.
Editing for Non-Native English Writers
In-depth editing or rewriting to ensure documents read as native-level professional English.
REPRESENTATIVE WORK:
- Investment memoranda
- Pitch decks and investor presentations
- Financial and valuation reports
- Investor letters and shareholder reports
- Board papers and management reviews
- Business plans and strategy documents
- Academic and policy reports
- White papers and long-form analysis
ADDITIONAL EXPERIENCE:
- Advising founders on investor-facing communication
- Overhauling pitch decks to support fundraising
- Coaching and mentoring founders, entrepreneurs, and senior executives
- Sitting on boards and occasionally investing
I have helped 200+ entrepreneurs, academics, executives, and creatives turn complex drafts into clear, professional documents that achieve results. I am also an active Upwork client myself and have awarded over 140 projects, maintaining a 5-star client rating.
FINAL NOTE:
I am selective about the work I take on and prioritise projects where judgment, discretion, and experience matter. I believe my pricing represents strong value for the level of scrutiny and expertise provided.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Trevor can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Trevor receives requirements from you.
Trevor works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Submit Investment Pitch
I'll assess your pitch within a 48-hour window and provide you with a clear formula for improvement, from an investor's perspective.