You will get Playtest & Game Feedback – Expert Commentary on Your Build
Project details
Want to see how a systems design expert experiences your game on first contact?
I’ll record a playthrough of your early build with live commentary, followed by a detailed breakdown of what’s working, what’s confusing, and how to improve it.
✔ Recorded first-playthrough video with real-time reactions and UX observations
✔ Professional summary covering design flow, balance, and playability
✔ Insights into onboarding, art direction, and early retention signals
✔ Clear answers to your custom questions and design concerns
Ideal for devs with a prototype or vertical slice who want meaningful, design-driven feedback. You’ll receive actionable insights, a systems-first evaluation, and a professional recommendations document with clear next steps to strengthen your build.
I’ll record a playthrough of your early build with live commentary, followed by a detailed breakdown of what’s working, what’s confusing, and how to improve it.
✔ Recorded first-playthrough video with real-time reactions and UX observations
✔ Professional summary covering design flow, balance, and playability
✔ Insights into onboarding, art direction, and early retention signals
✔ Clear answers to your custom questions and design concerns
Ideal for devs with a prototype or vertical slice who want meaningful, design-driven feedback. You’ll receive actionable insights, a systems-first evaluation, and a professional recommendations document with clear next steps to strengthen your build.
Testing Platform
Website Testing, Mobile Testing, Software Testing, Game TestingDevice
PC, Android Mobile PhoneLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$299
|
Standard
$500
|
Advanced
$1,000
|
|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 5 days | 5 days | 8 days |
Number of Revisions | 0 | 1 | 2 |
Number of Pages Tested | 1 | 5 | 10 |
Screen Recording Time (Minutes) | 120 | 120 | 300 |
Test Scenario | - | - | - |
Summary Report | |||
Annotated Screenshots | - | - | - |
Test Desktop | |||
Test Mobile |
Optional add-ons
You can add these on the next page.
Additional 60min Recording Time
(+ 1 Day)
+$200About Avery
Systems Design & Game Monetization Consultant | 1B+ Revenue
Barcelona, Spain - 4:58 am local time
I help studios and indie teams design smarter systems that keep players engaged and spending responsibly, without hurting the player experience. From economy balance and progression tuning to monetization strategy and live ops design, I turn complex problems into practical solutions you can implement immediately.
Past brands include Star Trek: Fleet Command, Pokémon, and Disney. I know what works because I’ve built and led design teams, scoped features, balanced game economies, and tuned monetization systems at scale.
What I can deliver for you:
* Playable design feedback with specific fixes you can apply now
* Video playtests with commentary highlighting what works (and what doesn’t)
* Economy or balance spreadsheets and actionable tuning suggestions
* Concept validation and market-fit advice for your game idea
* Strategy sessions for sustainable monetization that feels fair to players
I work with indie developers, small studios, and live teams who want real, experienced design guidance without endless back-and-forth or vague advice.
If you want practical, actionable help to make the design of your game stronger,
let’s talk!
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Avery can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Avery receives requirements from you.
Avery works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Receive build, install, and ensure it runs
Record video playthrough of build with design commentary
I will play through the build as a fresh player, while providing design commentary as a Creative Director backed by 20+ years of industry experience.