You will get a detailed beta reading & critique for your romance or fantasy book
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Is your manuscript ready for the world, but you’re unsure if it will truly captivate romance or fantasy readers?
As a professional beta reader and manuscript critique specialist, I provide detailed, actionable feedback that transforms your story from good to unforgettable. With years of experience in romance, fantasy, and paranormal fiction, I will guide you through refining your plot, characters, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring your readers stay hooked from the first page to the last.
My comprehensive beta reading report includes:
Chapter-by-chapter notes capturing authentic reader reactions
Insightful analysis of narrative structure, pacing, and character arcs
Clear, actionable suggestions to elevate your story
Identification of strengths to highlight and weaknesses to fix
Professional guidance on market appeal and genre expectations
Receive thorough, honest, and constructive feedback that respects your voice while enhancing readability.
Ready to make your story impossible to resist?
Let’s collaborate and turn your manuscript into a captivating journey readers won’t forget. Order now and take the first step toward a polished, compelling book.
As a professional beta reader and manuscript critique specialist, I provide detailed, actionable feedback that transforms your story from good to unforgettable. With years of experience in romance, fantasy, and paranormal fiction, I will guide you through refining your plot, characters, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring your readers stay hooked from the first page to the last.
My comprehensive beta reading report includes:
Chapter-by-chapter notes capturing authentic reader reactions
Insightful analysis of narrative structure, pacing, and character arcs
Clear, actionable suggestions to elevate your story
Identification of strengths to highlight and weaknesses to fix
Professional guidance on market appeal and genre expectations
Receive thorough, honest, and constructive feedback that respects your voice while enhancing readability.
Ready to make your story impossible to resist?
Let’s collaborate and turn your manuscript into a captivating journey readers won’t forget. Order now and take the first step toward a polished, compelling book.
Genre
Fantasy, Fiction, RomanceLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$30
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Standard
$70
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Advanced
$100
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| Delivery Time | 2 days | 5 days | 6 days |
Number of Words | 10000 | 50000 | 99999 |
Sample Line Edit | - | - | - |
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Jessica L.
Mar 28, 2026
Copyediting for a ~26,000-Word Nonfiction Manuscript
Adeyanju was an absolute pleasure to work with. Her communication was clear, thoughtful, and consistent from start to finish, and her turnaround time was impressively quick. She was thorough without being heavy-handed, and her edits really strengthened the manuscript while still preserving my voice. If anything, the process took longer on my end due to my own delays. I’m genuinely pleased with both the quality of her work and the care she put into her feedback, and I would highly recommend her to anyone looking for a skilled and reliable copyeditor.
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Dawnette B.
Feb 24, 2026
Developmental Editor Needed for Manuscript Review
Adeyanju was professional and adept at book edits. She was also receptive and responsive to requests and timely in delivering products. She worked tirelessly to ensure I was happy overall.
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Temidayo O.
Jan 2, 2026
Book Editor & Proofreader Needed for Polished Manuscript
Adeyanju delivered thorough, thoughtful editing with excellent attention to detail. Her feedback was clear and actionable, and she respected the manuscript's voice while strengthening its clarity. Professional communication throughout.
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Malik A.
Dec 29, 2025
Developmental Editor Needed
Adeyanju handled the full editing process for my project, developmental, copy, and line editing and did excellent work across all three. She strengthened the overall structure and flow, caught grammar and consistency issues I'd missed, and polished the prose without losing my voice. Her feedback was clear and actionable, and she delivered everything on schedule. What stood out was how she balanced big-picture improvements with detailed sentence-level refinement. Professional, thorough, and easy to work with. She's highly recommended.
About Adeyanju
Book Editor, Copy Line editing, Proofreading, Amazon KDP, Ghostwriting
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Surulere, Nigeria - 10:14 am local time
DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING
Big-picture structural editing covering story structure, narrative cohesion, pacing, character arc, POV consistency, scene effectiveness, and reader engagement. You receive a detailed editorial letter with chapter-by-chapter recommendations. Ideal for first drafts needing a strong editorial foundation before publication.
LINE EDITING
Sentence-level editing that sharpens readability, tone, rhythm, word flow, and emotional impact while preserving your authentic author voice. Every line is read for what it does to the reader, not just whether it is grammatically correct.
COPY EDITING
Professional grammar correction, punctuation, spelling, syntax, and manuscript consistency following the Chicago Manual of Style. Every repeated word, broken sentence, and continuity gap gets flagged and fixed.
PROOFREADING
Final proofreading pass before you publish on Amazon KDP, IngramSpark, or Draft2Digital, or submit to a literary agent. Covers typos, grammar, punctuation, and formatting consistency, the last set of eyes before your book reaches readers.
MANUSCRIPT FORMATTING AND KDP FORMATTING
Clean interior book formatting for ebooks and print books, fully compliant with Amazon KDP requirements. Includes margins, typography, chapter structure, front matter, table of contents, and print-ready PDF output.
GHOSTWRITING
Full-length book ghostwriting for nonfiction, memoir, self-help, Christian books, romance, and fiction, written entirely in your voice. Nonfiction ghostwriter, memoir ghostwriter, self-help ghostwriter: the process starts with understanding your vision before writing a single word. Strict confidentiality guaranteed.
MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUE AND BETA READING
In-depth manuscript critique and beta reading covering plot structure, pacing, character development, POV handling, voice consistency, and reader experience. Ideal before investing in full editing.
GENRES I WORK WITH
Fiction: Romance, Dark Romance, Billionaire Romance, Fantasy, Progression Fantasy, Thriller, Mystery, Literary Fiction, Historical Fiction, Horror, Science Fiction, Contemporary Fiction, Young Adult
Nonfiction: Self-Help, Personal Development, Memoir, Christian Nonfiction, Spirituality, Business, Health and Wellness, Motivational, True Crime
HOW I WORK
My editing process starts before I touch a single sentence. I read your full manuscript first, taking detailed notes on what is working, what is not, and why. You will never receive a surface-level pass or a grammar correction dressed up as developmental editing.
Every project is delivered with tracked changes in Microsoft Word, so you stay in full control of every decision. Your voice is preserved throughout. My job is to make your book sound more like you, not like me.
My strongest results are in fiction editing across romance, fantasy, and thriller, and in nonfiction editing for memoir, self-help, and Christian books. Over 20 manuscripts edited. Authors have gone on to self-publish on Amazon KDP, pitch to literary agents, and launch books that readers finish and recommend.
WHAT EVERY CLIENT RECEIVES
✔ Track Changes plus a clean final copy on every project
✔ Custom style sheet documenting names, spellings, timeline, and style decisions
✔ Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS) applied consistently throughout
✔ Voice preservation and voice matching guaranteed on every project
✔ AI humanization for manuscripts drafted with ChatGPT, Claude, Jasper, or any AI tool
✔ Full confidentiality with NDA available on request
✔ Deadlines honoured without exception on every project
✔ FREE 500-word sample edit of your opening pages before you commit
Send me your genre, word count, service needed, and target publishing date. I will reply within 24 hours with a personalised quote and a FREE 500-word sample edit, no commitment required.
Every manuscript has the potential to become a book readers genuinely remember. Sometimes it just needs the right editorial eye to uncover what is already there.
Manuscript Editor | Book Editor | Developmental Editor | Line Editor | Copy Editor | Proofreader | Ghostwriter | AI Content Editor | AI Humanization | Book Humanization | KDP Formatting | Query Letter Writing | Beta Reader | Fiction Editor | Nonfiction Editor | Romance Editor | Dark Romance Editor | Thriller Editor | Fantasy Editor | Copy Editor | Young Adult Editor | Self-Publishing Editor | Amazon KDP Editor | Literary Fiction Editor | Sci-Fi Editor | Historical Fiction Editor | Memoir Editor | Business Book Editor | Self-Help Editor | Track Changes
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Adeyanju can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Adeyanju receives requirements from you.
Adeyanju works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Manuscript Review & Beta Reading
I carefully read your manuscript and provide detailed beta reading feedback, including reader reactions, notes on plot, pacing, character development, and overall story flow.
Detailed Feedback Report Delivery
You will receive a comprehensive beta reading report and manuscript critique with actionable suggestions, strengths of your story, and clear recommendations to help improve your romance or fantasy book.