You will get a thorough and actionable beta reader report and critique
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Project details
My beta reading service will give you constructive and actionable feedback about your short story, novel, or non-fiction book. Instead of a list of random likes/dislikes, you'll receive:
a) a thorough report based on a specially crafted beta reader questionnaire (attached)
b) in-line comments
c) answers to your questions
d) answers to follow-up questions
In the report:
a)Concrete suggestions/ideas about strengths and weaknesses
b)Food for thought - questions pointing at what readers might become unsure
c) Straightforward and analytical comments rather than passionate remarks
d)Comments on the first and last chapters
The goal of beta reading is to upgrade the overall quality of your writing. I'll never limit your creative freedom. I don’t believe in bad writing, only in writing that needs work to reveal its full value.
a) Fiction - plot, characters, dialogue, pacing. Genres: literary, horror/crime/thriller, sci-fi/fantasy, romance
b) Non-fiction - structure, authority, uniqueness, voice. Genres: self-help, business, memoir, travel/living abroad
*Before purchasing, please get in touch to check my availability and discuss a delivery date. Inform genre + word count + age group*
a) a thorough report based on a specially crafted beta reader questionnaire (attached)
b) in-line comments
c) answers to your questions
d) answers to follow-up questions
In the report:
a)Concrete suggestions/ideas about strengths and weaknesses
b)Food for thought - questions pointing at what readers might become unsure
c) Straightforward and analytical comments rather than passionate remarks
d)Comments on the first and last chapters
The goal of beta reading is to upgrade the overall quality of your writing. I'll never limit your creative freedom. I don’t believe in bad writing, only in writing that needs work to reveal its full value.
a) Fiction - plot, characters, dialogue, pacing. Genres: literary, horror/crime/thriller, sci-fi/fantasy, romance
b) Non-fiction - structure, authority, uniqueness, voice. Genres: self-help, business, memoir, travel/living abroad
*Before purchasing, please get in touch to check my availability and discuss a delivery date. Inform genre + word count + age group*
Genre
Fiction, NonfictionLanguage
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$35
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Standard
$75
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Advanced
$120
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| Delivery Time | 5 days | 9 days | 12 days |
Number of Words | 10000 | 50000 | 100000 |
Sample Line Edit | |||
Reader Report |
Optional add-ons
You can add these on the next page.
Extra 20k words
(+ 2 Days)
+$20
Extra 30k words
(+ 3 Days)
+$30
Extra 10k words
(+ 1 Day)
+$10Frequently asked questions
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Abigail W.
Jul 22, 2025
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Ruhi P.
May 4, 2025
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Brittany H.
Feb 26, 2025
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Paul B.
Nov 12, 2024
Lucy delivered excellent beta reader feedback, with both a comprehensive report and numerous critiques/observations within the manuscript. Her work was detailed, thorough, and completed on time. Communication was great, and I sincerely appreciate her availability after delivering the work to answer questions or clarify feedback. I will definitely seek to hire Lucy in the future for similar work. 10/10
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Derek I.
Oct 16, 2024
Very thorough review
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Tom B.
May 25, 2026
Meticulous Beta Reader Needed – Nonfiction Real Estate Investing Book (Detailed Review)
Lucy was professional, responsive, and easy to work with throughout the project. She communicated clearly, accepted feedback well, and stayed committed to getting the work completed. I appreciated her positive attitude and willingness to work with me..
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Maja S.
May 22, 2026
Feedback Evaluation for Stories
The communication was great, and the work was done well and on time.
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Andras P.
May 1, 2026
Betareading for a short novelette
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KJ E.
Apr 18, 2026
Beta Reader Needed – Upmarket / Literary Thriller (Subtle Speculative, Agent-Ready)
Lucy provided a thoughtful and well-balanced beta read that was both insightful and practical. Her feedback stood out for how clearly she identified where the story was working and where it needed more clarity or grounding, without losing sight of the overall reading experience. She has a strong instinct for pacing and reader engagement, and her notes helped highlight moments where tension could be strengthened or where the narrative could be made more accessible. What I appreciated most was her ability to point out issues while also reinforcing what was effective, making the feedback both constructive and motivating.
Her perspective has been genuinely valuable in shaping the next stage of revisions, and I’d highly recommend her to any writer looking for clear, reader-focused feedback that improves both structure and flow.
Her perspective has been genuinely valuable in shaping the next stage of revisions, and I’d highly recommend her to any writer looking for clear, reader-focused feedback that improves both structure and flow.
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Kritika S.
Apr 9, 2026
Native Portuguese Translator for AI Translated Text Review
It was our second time working with Lucy, and once again she delivered excellent results. Communication was smooth, the work was completed on time, and her reliability really stands out. Highly recommended.
About Lucy
Editor | Writer | Beta Reader | Ghostwriter | Book Coach
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Job Success
Carlow, Ireland - 2:53 am local time
On Upwork since 2015 and receiving many 5-star reviews, I offer reliable support, quick turnaround, and affordable pricing.
My background combines journalism, marketing, public relations, editorial management, and creative writing, allowing me to work across both commercial and literary projects with equal attention to strategy, clarity, and voice.
---> EDITORIAL SERVICES
- Beta reading with actionable feedback on narrative, pacing, character development, clarity, and reader engagement.
- Developmental and structural editing of fiction and non-fiction books.
- Book coaching: brainstorming, planning, accountability sessions, body doubling.
- Ghostwriting: from research, interviews, and outline to final draft, capturing your voice and ideas to produce manuscripts.
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Genres
- Fiction: Literary, Horror/Crime/Thriller, Romance (Sweet & Spicy), Sci-Fi/Fantasy.
- Non-Fiction: Self-help/Wellness/Lifestyle, Business/Management/Marketing, Memoir/Biography, Travel/Living Abroad.
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Key Facts
- Researched, interviewed, wrote, and edited a 227-page print book documenting a 40-year institutional history.
- Published author of poems and short stories.
- Former journalist (Arts & Entertainment, later Science & Technology).
- I am an avid reader (around 80 books/year).
- Supported over 60 authors here on Upwork, receiving many 5-star reviews.
- Member of the Irish Writers Centre since 2014, and member of Carlow Writers’ Co-op (County Carlow, Ireland) since 2025.
---> BUSINESS SERVICES:
- Copywriting and content writing – original content created from interviews, transcripts, and subject-matter expertise (life/professional experience).
- Consulting - content marketing strategy, editorial planning, workflow organisation, and team leadership.
- Editing – structural and sentence-level refinement to strengthen clarity, style, readability, and consistency.
- Ghostwriting – publication-ready content, capturing your expertise and voice to produce authoritative newsletters, e-books, and more.
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Types of Content
Articles, blog posts, website content, landing pages, sales pages, About pages, newsletters, e-books, and social media posts.
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Key Facts
- Led, as their Regional Editor-in-Chief, the growth of a payment solutions editorial website from launch to over 100,000 monthly visitors.
- Created and implemented marketing strategies for a PR agency, growing client base from 4 to 42 in less than a year.
- Helped position two solutions as the leading parenting apps for mothers-to-be and new mothers, respectively.
- Through agencies or directly, I’ve worked for Google, Yahoo, Expedia, Ernst & Young (EY), Arthur Andersen, Saeco, Mazars Performance, ABB Service, Iberdrola, and more.
---> EXPERIENCE & BACKGROUND
- Full-time sole trader registered with the Irish Revenue since 2015.
- Top-Rated Freelancer on Upwork since 2015.
- Accredited Practitioner Coach (IAPC&M).
- Former public relations manager, marketing consultant, and planning manager for several industries – private, non-profit and public sector.
Academic Background
- BSc. in Communications (Major in Journalism).
- BSc. in Nursing (2 years) + Neurosciences internship.
- MBA in Marketing.
- Copyediting Certification - Writer’s Digest.
- Content Marketing Certification - Copyblogger and HubSpot.
---> SKILLS & TOOLS
- CMS tools: WordPress, Contently, Wix, Divi.
- SEO tools: Ahrefs, SEMrush, Moz, Google Analytics, Google Search Console.
- Project Management tools: Asana, JIRA, Monday, Notion, Slack, and others.
---> OTHER SERVICES:
- Translation, editing, localisation, and proofreading between English and Brazilian Portuguese.
- Humanisation and editing of AI-generated content. Tools: ChatGPT, Gemini, Copilot, Claude, Perplexity.
- Editorial assistance for publishers: multi-book editorial support, manuscript preparation, and workflow coordination.
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Feel free to reach out if you'd like to discuss your project or see how I can help bring your ideas to life.
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so Lucy can start the project.
Delivery time starts when Lucy receives requirements from you.
Lucy works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Reading & Report
I'll read your manuscript to get a general feel, highlighting what stands out to me (positively and negatively). Then I'll go back and analyse the manuscript more carefully, improving the in-line comments. Finally, I'll write the reader report.