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You’ve finished your script and now you want it to reach its full potential!
I’d love to help bring out the best in your screenplay. I believe that storytelling is both an art and a science, and it’s with that mindset that I evaluate every screenplay I read.
I’ll provide honest and insightful notes on theme, story, structure, character, dialogue, tone, visual grammar and pace. But I’m not just here to describe the current state of the script - I’ll make suggestions about how to improve the script, so that the next draft really shines!
I believe in being completely open about how many pages of feedback you’ll get. I also don’t want to pad out the pages with things you don’t want, so I don’t include a synopsis or score sheet by default.
I’m an accomplished script writer and script analyst with eight years experience in the industry and a distinction-level masters degree in screenwriting. My work has been screened in cinemas, published online and exhibited within high-profile galleries and institutions.
If you’d like to see an example of my script reports, get in touch and I’d be happy to send you a sample.
Whatever the length, genre or format, I hope to read your script!
I’d love to help bring out the best in your screenplay. I believe that storytelling is both an art and a science, and it’s with that mindset that I evaluate every screenplay I read.
I’ll provide honest and insightful notes on theme, story, structure, character, dialogue, tone, visual grammar and pace. But I’m not just here to describe the current state of the script - I’ll make suggestions about how to improve the script, so that the next draft really shines!
I believe in being completely open about how many pages of feedback you’ll get. I also don’t want to pad out the pages with things you don’t want, so I don’t include a synopsis or score sheet by default.
I’m an accomplished script writer and script analyst with eight years experience in the industry and a distinction-level masters degree in screenwriting. My work has been screened in cinemas, published online and exhibited within high-profile galleries and institutions.
If you’d like to see an example of my script reports, get in touch and I’d be happy to send you a sample.
Whatever the length, genre or format, I hope to read your script!
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| Service Tiers |
Starter
$57
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Standard
$95
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Advanced
$171
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|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 7 days | 7 days | 7 days |
Number of Revisions | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Number of Pages | 4 | 5 | 6 |
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Optional add-ons
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Longer script
+$38
Video call to discuss feedback
+$45
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Jon H.
Aug 16, 2024
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Jon H.
May 16, 2024
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Bayo L.
May 9, 2024
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Chris W.
Jun 13, 2026
Historical Drama / Romance Writer Wanted — Ancient Rome / Boudica
I've had the honour to use Peter's expertise a number of times over the years. Always a pleasure to work with him. Very honest and detailed in his application to the assignments he's presented with tackling. Here's to the next one.
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Ekaterina H.
Mar 29, 2026
Cold Water Queens - script review
Extremely grateful for this coaching experience. I am moving on from this project a much more resilient and capable writer.
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Otilija K.
Feb 11, 2026
UK native copywriter needed to prepare VO copy for an ad
Peter was a pleasure to work with. He is super responsive and attentive, took all instructions into account and strived for the best possible quality.
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Barry S.
Dec 8, 2025
Dreamcatcher - script edit
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Ekaterina H.
Nov 26, 2025
Ride Upon A Star - Initial comments
Insightful, attentive and extremely precise. Peter's feedback always adds depth and clarity to the script. A joy to work with and highly recommended.
About Peter
Award-Winning Scriptwriter & Script Development Consultant
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Bristol, United Kingdom - 2:04 am local time
I specialise in emotionally rich, character-driven stories for film, TV, audio drama, games, animation, and branded content. My work spans everything from contained indie dramas and true-story adaptations to animated explainers, murder mystery games, and high-concept genre pieces.
Some quick credentials:
• MA Screenwriting (Distinction, UWE) and BA Film Production (First Class, UCA)
• Founder of Script Lighthouse, providing story development to clients worldwide
• Script reader and analyst for organisations such as the BFI, ScriptUp, Script Studio, Unsolicited Scripts, The Pitch Film Fund, The Film Exchange, and Sheffield Global Cinema Festival
• Experience with production companies including Wrong Dimension Productions, Moose Alley Films, Pood Studio, Red Amber, Soul Sentinel Productions, Tasnim Creates, Spiral Media, and more
• Multiple awards, including Filmarket Hub’s Project of the Month and Best Screenplay at 48HFP Amsterdam
On Upwork, I typically help clients with:
• Script development and rewrites
Taking a draft that is “almost there” and shaping it into a tighter, more emotionally satisfying script with clear structure, sharper dialogue, and stronger character arcs.
• Script coverage and in-depth notes
Professional reader-style reports covering premise, structure, character, theme, tone, pacing, dialogue, and market positioning, with precise, practical recommendations.
• Book-to-screen adaptation
Translating novels, memoirs, and true stories into cinematic screenplays or series bibles that preserve the heart of the original while working for screen.
• Concept development and beat sheets
Helping you clarify your idea, build a robust spine (logline, premise, theme, character journeys), and map out a scene-by-scene outline.
• Explainer, animation, and e-learning scripts
Crafting narrative-driven scripts and storyboards that make complex ideas clear, engaging, and visually playable for animation teams and clients.
Clients often tell me they value my ability to:
• Quickly understand what they are trying to say and why it matters
• Offer honest but tactful feedback that respects their voice
• Find solutions that are both creatively exciting and practically achievable
• Bring a calm, organised, collaborative presence to the process
Whether you need a full script, a page-one rewrite, detailed coverage on a draft, or a development partner to help shape a project over time, I would be happy to help.
Send me a brief description of your project, what you are hoping to achieve, and where you are in the process, and we can work out the best way forward.
Steps for completing your project
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Delivery time starts when Peter receives requirements from you.
Peter works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
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