You will get script coverage notes and feedback on your screenplay
Project details
Writing can be a solitary pursuit, but it doesn’t have to be. If you're looking for a fresh perspective on your script, I'm here to help. Just book a gig, grab a cappuccino, and let me dive into your script while you take a break.
With years of screenwriting experience, I provide detailed, constructive notes (some of the most thorough on Fiverr) to help make your script the best it can be.
What you'll get:
• In-depth notes: a deep dive into plot, character development, pacing, structure, and dialogue. Expect at least eight pages of feedback!
• Honest and balanced feedback: a fair assessment that highlights strengths and areas for improvement.
• Actionable tips: advice on tightening the plot, deepening character arcs, improving pacing, refining structure, and more, all tailored to your story.
• Collaborative & Supportive Approach: I’ll help refine your script while keeping your vision intact.
• Ongoing support: Need more guidance? I can continue to support you as your writing coach or accountability partner.
CHOOSE A PACKAGE OR MESSAGE ME FOR A CUSTOM GIG NOW! :)
With years of screenwriting experience, I provide detailed, constructive notes (some of the most thorough on Fiverr) to help make your script the best it can be.
What you'll get:
• In-depth notes: a deep dive into plot, character development, pacing, structure, and dialogue. Expect at least eight pages of feedback!
• Honest and balanced feedback: a fair assessment that highlights strengths and areas for improvement.
• Actionable tips: advice on tightening the plot, deepening character arcs, improving pacing, refining structure, and more, all tailored to your story.
• Collaborative & Supportive Approach: I’ll help refine your script while keeping your vision intact.
• Ongoing support: Need more guidance? I can continue to support you as your writing coach or accountability partner.
CHOOSE A PACKAGE OR MESSAGE ME FOR A CUSTOM GIG NOW! :)
Language
EnglishWhat's included
| Service Tiers |
Starter
$20
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Standard
$40
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Advanced
$60
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|---|---|---|---|
| Delivery Time | 4 days | 8 days | 10 days |
Number of Revisions | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Number of Pages of Notes | 6 | 8 | 10 |
Logline | - | - | - |
Synopsis | - | - | - |
Ratings Sheet | - | - | - |
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Fast Delivery
+$10 - $20
Ratings Sheet
+$5
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Ghasideh G.
Sep 5, 2025
Craft script outline
I truly feel like I found a diamond here! David is an outstanding scriptwriter with a rare combination of creativity, professionalism, and deep storytelling skills. It was the second time, and again the collaboration was genuinely inspiring! I can highly recommend hin and would love to work together again in the future!
About David
Screenwriter & Writing Coach | OSCAR Winner Student & BAFTA Finalist
Hamburg, Germany - 5:19 pm local time
With over a decade of writing experience and a Master of Arts in Screenwriting, I have developed several feature and short films that have been showcased at more than 1,000 festivals worldwide, earning numerous awards...including one of the highest honors for emerging filmmakers — a Student OSCAR® awarded by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences.
I have also served on juries at international film festivals and supported writers at all levels in shaping and refining their stories.
Whether you are working on a novel, screenplay, or concept pitch, I can help with
• Research and story development
• Plotting and structure
• Writing and rewriting
• In-depth feedback and script coverage
My goal is to help you bring your vision to life with clarity, emotion, and impact.
Let’s start this creative journey together.
Contact me today to discuss how I can support your project!
Steps for completing your project
After purchasing the project, send requirements so David can start the project.
Delivery time starts when David receives requirements from you.
David works on your project following the steps below.
Revisions may occur after the delivery date.
Initial Read-Through
I read the entire script once without taking notes to absorb the story, tone, and pacing as a reader or viewer would.
Detailed Second Read with Annotations
On the second read, I take detailed notes on structure, character development, dialogue, theme, pacing, logic, and emotional engagement.